PLOT

[Larien Melwasúl]

Fear has enveloped in the souls of clan cats. Three kits have mysteriously dissappeared. An apprentice is found dead. And a mighty warrior has staggared back to camp, his tongue ripped out. What is happening? Only one thing is for sure, no cat is safe.

The Herb Clan Cats...

...must find out who is causing these problems. Is it rogues? Another clan? Badgers? StarClan? Twolegs?

Whoever it is, they need to stop. The clans struggle to form an alliance. Can they unite? Can four become one? Can the stop the evil?

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That right there is the snipet from the advertisement. I really haven't developed it too much, but I created a little idea, and I hope you all like it.

Firstly, maybe you all have noticed that I have created a new catagory called Other Lands with some new boards in it. I am still working on it, so give me a little time.

If you read through the boards and their description, you will have read that in the Two-leg dump, there is this Rat Hollow with these nearly cat-sized rats that the rogues living in the dump eat, but the rats in turn will attack and eat a straying rogue. I am thinking that these rats will be the 'bad guys' in this plot.

So in the first part of the advertisement, it says that some cats(three kits, one apprentice, and one mighty warrior) are...suddenly....affected by this....darkness o.O. I was thinking, that there are three little kits that are too curious and wander out of their clan's territory and into the Twoleg dump. They die. And an apprentice is hunting by themself near the border and some rats out looking for prey kill him, hear some warriors coming(as they heard the apprentice's cry) and scatter before they can eat them. And the mighty warrior decided he wanted to find out what happened to these disapperances. He went to the two-leg dump....and got attacked by the rats. Instead of killing him right away, the rats decide to torture him a bit. So they rip out his togue and they rip off one of his ears. But before they can do anything else, some rogues jump in and save the warrior.

But before all this, there are some things. Firstly, the clans do not get along. No, a whole bunch of cats don't get along. The rats and rogues do not get along. The two-leg dump is on the VervainClan border(on the outside of the circle of clans) so the rogues and VervainClan do not get along, as they have had a couple of fights. HollyClan and JuniperClan do not get along. They have had many mix-mating and that has breed hate and distrust. And now, unknowingly to both clans, a young warrior from each clan is falling in love with the other. SageClan doesn't like any other clan, as they other clans have pushed Sageclan around in the past. But now they grow strong and the other clans do not know it. SageClan plans on proving that they are the strongest out of all the clans. There are also several loners who do not know what to think of the clans. Some are on the side of the rats, who wish to drive out all the cats for good in order that they can have more territory. Some loners would like to join a clan, and some would just like to live peacefully by themself.

But StarClan senses crumbling of strength among the clans. And they fear that if the clans do not come together, the rats will overthrow the power of the clans. But an even deeper fear is that even if the clans do come together, will that even be enough?

Some clans will be in favor of joining up with the rogues, some in favor of joining up with loners....and some with joining up with the....rats?

Whatever happens, StarClan needs to warn the clans of upcoming dangers.

What do you think? Does that sound okay? If so, here are positions

HollyClan
in favor of teaming up with the rogues, as they helped their mighty warrior
Young tom that falls in love with a she-cat from JuniperClan [Open]
The Mighty Warrior [Open]
Warrior that dies in battle [Open]
Elder that dies in rat attack [Open]
Tom warrior that falls in love with a rogue she-cat [Open]
Ravenstar loses at least 1 life [Ravenstar]

VervainClan
against teaming up with rogues or loners, "loners steal our prey" and "we have been battling rogues for ever"
Kit #1 [Leafkit]
Kit #2 [Clawkit]
Kit #3 [Hinderkit]
Warrior that dies in Rogue battle [Open]
Warrior that dies in Rat attack battle [Open]
Spiderstar loses at least 1 life [Spiderstar]

JuniperClan
in favor of teaming up with loners, as they are friends with
Apprentice that dies[Open]
Warrior that finds dead apprentice [Limestone]
Apprentice that finds dead apprentice [Skypaw]
Young she-cat warrior that falls in love with the tom from HollyClan [Open]
Warrior that dies in rat attack [Open]
Apprentice friendly with a loner [Canarypaw]
Dragonstar loses at least 1 life [Dragonstar]

SageClan
in favor of isolating themselves away from the other clans
Warrior that wants to join the rats [Open] *
Warrior that wants to join the rats [Open]
Warrior that wants to let a couple loners join SageClan [Open]
Apprentice that wants to be on the same side with the other clans [Dovepaw]
Warrior that is betrayed by rats and dies[Open] *
Winterstar loses 2 lives [Winterstar]
Apprentice that dies in Rat attack [Open]

Rogues
Rogue #1 that helps the Mighty Warrior [Open]
Rogue #2 that helps the Mighty Warrior [Open]
Rogue #3 that helps the Mighty Warrior [Open]
Rogue she-cat that falls in love with a HollyClan warrior [Open]
Rogue that gets killed and eaten by rats (happens right away) [Open]
Rogue that steals prey from VervainClan [Darksong]

Loners
Loner that steals VervainClan's prey [Open]
Loner #1 that is friends with JuniperClan [Open]
Loner #2 that is friends with JuniperClan [Open]
Loner that is friends with SageClan [Flicker]
Loner that is friends with the rats(dies) [Open]

Rats
Rat #1 that attacks Mighty Warrior [Open]
Rat #2 that attacks Mighty Warrior [Open]
** All rats die in the counter attack by the Clans

So....yeah. If the spots don't get taken, I suppose we could make some extras/stunts. You can volunter your own cat, or you can make a new one. Also, one cat can to multipul things. Like he/she can do one thing and then get killed later.

Also...the medicine cats. The medicine cats from each clan will get prophecies of some sort. Flashstorm(emzie) of JuniperClan will have a vision at the MoonTree of the feelings, thoughts, sight, scents of the apprentice as s/he is getting attacked by the rats. This will happen before the apprentice is actually attacked, like a couple days or so. The same thing will happen for the VervainClan medicine cat and the three kits, and Dreamsky(spottedshadow) with the Mighty Warrior.

Feathermist(catxofxice) and I will work out an actually prophecy. Since SageClan has no cat getting attacked by the rats, Feathermist will receive a worded/verbal prophecy from StarClan. I don't know what it is yet, but it will concern the clans and how some evil is brewing, and how the clans are falling apart, and how they must unite to save everyone. And maybe Feathermist and all of SageClan don't really want to tell the other clans about the prophecy, but it somehow slips out...and ladedadeda.

Any questions, comments, or suggestions...please post below!

[Echo]

Does the young she-cat from Juniperclan have to be a warrior?
Because Mythicalpoison could be the young she-cat from Juniperclan! But, she's the deputy, so....
But it could be a good twist x3

[Larien Melwasúl]

You could put up a very good argue that the leader and deputy of a clan are warriors, so that's fine. But as in young....I was thinking between 15 and 25 moons....

[Emzie]

For Juniper, Canarypaw could be friends with a loner. She's an outsider in the clan anyways

And perhaps Splashfoot from Holly could fall in love with a rouge, since he was one before.

And I'm thinking about making a loner that was formerly in a clan. He would probably have questionable alliances, and might perhaps steal prey. Whatever you think!

[Larien Melwasúl]

Sure!

[CATxOFxICE]

Icefeather of HollyClan falls in love with a Rouge, he never really seemed interested in Clan life.... so that might give his reason!

And then Moonsong's apprentice could die [Have to ask, but I think it suites because Moonsong's kind of delicate....] and maybe Limestone could find him....

Also, I guess Wanderingspirit might die as he sort of would be found alone..... the Rat attack, that is

[Emzie]

Canarypaw is Moonsong's apprentice. NO

[Ravenstar]

um, Moonsong could be the JuniperClan she-cat tht falls in love with a HollyClan tom, she's always wanted kits and she's kind of naive... and she's only like 19 moons i think

[CATxOFxICE]

Oh! I was thinking it was someone else.... I think I was thinking of Mysterypaw.....

[Ravenstar]

and Darkwing could be the Vervain warrior that dies in either the rat attack or the rogue battle... whichever one happens last....

AND Dovepaw could be the apprentice that wants to be on the same side with the other Clans from SageClan, she's all peace-loving and wanting to help everyone so... it would work well!

[walkerm]

Thunderstorm could be the Mighty Warrior--it suits his personality....

[Emzie]

Darksong is the Loner I made. I always get Loner and Rouge confused....so I -think- I made him to be a loner....and he can steal Vervain's prey

[spottedshadow]

I was hoping that Mossstream could fall in love with the Hollyclan tom...

[CATxOFxICE]

Hm..... That will mean Owlkit is no longer mad at Feathermist! Unless another cat speaks to her..... Hm..... I'll PM you with some ideas.

[Surrle!]

Larkcry could be the HollyClan tom that falls in love with the JuniperClanner, and I was gonna make a rouge anyway, so I can make one to help the Mighty Warrior...